This movie is not bad at all
I see what you're trying to get at here, and I liked how you did some of the humor, but some of them weren't quite as funny to me as they should have been. Another problem that I had with this movie was the fact that you kind of killed the flow of the movie by entering ''Made By So & So'' and stuff like that while the movie was going. When you make Episode 2, try to put that stuff in the beginning so it doesn't interrupt the movie. Some parts in this movie moved kind of slow for me too, and a little choppy in some parts as well, but not horribly bad, just needs a Touch-Up in the next one.
Well, I'll be on the lookout for Episode 2!
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